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Thursday, January 31, 2008

Double Entry On Keeping a Journal Blog 11

Roy Hoffman said that he obtained his first notebook journal when he was a freshman in college. My first reaction to that was that it seemed a little late. I don't have a journal, but most people get them when they are really young.
His first entry said "Wild, crazy ecstasy wants to wrench my head from my body."
Okay so I know he was excited, but it kind of seemed morbid to me. I mean he does put it in a very descriptive way, but I would not have put it in those exact words. I wonder what exactly he was doing to be thinking like that? It's just really confusing to me.
He considered college notebooks as gold mines. I thought that it was a great way to think. It makes me wish I had one cept I would probably do it on the computer since I am much more efficient on the computer. I thought it was cool how he used those entries for his work later on in life. It's where he got alot of his ideas and they were more realistic.
Clouds. He said his friends, family, and everything in college were clouds. I was confused by this. Maybe he thought since none of them were the same, or maybe because they brightened the sky? I just really want to know why he considered people so close to him, clouds.
When reading his entries he said "like a wheel, home revolves, each turn regarded differently depending on the novel or political essay I'd been most influenced by the previous semester. I really liked how he put this. It was very interesting to me to read. It had so much truth behind it.

The writer of necessity

I am mostly a writer of necessity, usually to get something accomplished. Such as an argumentative letter, or to get a specific point across to someone. I write allot of notes and keep allot of records such as my sugar levels, blood test, and medical procedures. I keep written logs for vocational rehab, and work one. I am a very fictional writer, such as comical short stories for or about friends. I have started several songs that will probably never get finished, however I really hope they do. I enjoy writing the comical short stories for, and about my friends. It is fun for me, and my friends. Laughter is always a good way to lift everyone’s spirits.
I can see myself being a better writer the more I am subjected to the aspect of different types of writing. The fact that I have not been a writer of essays, poems, or any other artistic writing does not limit my writing by any means. I actually have a lot ideas that I would like to write about. Writing short stories about the things that are going on around me would definitely be possibilities for me to be a successful writer. Considering the fact that a successful writer can be some one who writes about anything, success is that the ready gets the point and can get into your mind and understand what you are trying to say.
This class is not really what I was expecting. It is actually very interesting, and I enjoy it a lot. It will definitely help me in my endeavors as a professional person. Although web management is my major, I will need to do a lot of writing for every class. It has already helped me with my public speaking class; it helps me get ideas, details and points of view in line with what I am actually trying to give my speeches about.

1. Characterizing Yourself as a Writer

Most writing I do now is freewriting or journaling. I began journaling at a very young age of seven. I received a diary as a Christmas present from my Grandmother. She encouraged me to log thoughts, feelings, and events I had throughout the day. I have continued to keep a journal over the years.
I began freewriting a few years ago. It was suggested to me when I had a problem to write about it. If I didn't know what to write, or became blocked, to write anything. For example, names, places, short thoughts; it doesn't have to make sense, as long as I continue to write my mind will form thoughts, and my feelings will begin to be written on the problem at hand. I may not end with a solution, but I will have a better idea of what to do or how to handle the situation. After freewriting about a troublesome situation I do feel better. There are times that I do read over things that I have journaled. I usually do not edit anything that I have written in my journals or freewriting. The reason for this is I am the only one to see these entries.
I am beginning to do essays again. I have not written an essay in over a decade. I am somewhat intimidated by the thought of an essay. Our text tells us to keep a positive attitude. I do not want to have a self-fulfilled prophecy of failure. For the most part my thoughts are upbeat about the process involved in writing an essay. In the past, from what I can recall, I began with an outline. When creating the outline I would decide what would be written about and how to put it all together.
From the outline I would write a rough draft. When reading my completed rough draft I would edit my paper. Usually I would find grammar and spelling mistakes as well as a better way to link my ideas. After editing, I would revise my paper to the final draft and submit my work.
All of the writing I have done has been handwritten. I have not had an opportunity or a need to write anything on a computer, except a resume. I will be introduced to a new concept when typing my thoughts and having the advantage of spell check and grammar help from the computer program. I am looking forward to this.

Amber's view about Roy Hoffman's Journal Essay

This essay talks about the author and his experience of keeping a journal during college. He then goes on to reflect on the journal years later. He finds that he has forgotten a lot about his college years.
I found it almost strange that a person would walk around with a little notebook and watch people and then just scribble away. My comment seemed to not go over well with people who spent a lot of time on a college campus. Evidently, this is a common thing on campus. These people have obviously never had the delightful feeling of being stalked. So, I would suppose when they see someone with a little note pad scribbling away, they assume that wow this person is trying to better themselves by keeping a journal. My first thought is I hope this guy does not try to follow me home.
This essay also talks about what it was like for the author when he would use his journal as a canvas to paint pictures in his on to the paper. His words were describing everything from the way the campus looked to the way the place sounded. He was able to remember things he did not even remember he had forgotten.
Going back he realized how much he had grown as a person, so this younger college version seemed to be almost a child. He thought at the time he was so grown up and knew so much, but like most young he was very ignorant to the idea of being a true adult.
He also discussed the issue of how vulnerable a journal can make you, a journal, of course, are so many thoughts and feelings about yourself. You can become naked in a sense to anyone who would read it. Then if you reflect back to it, you might not have those same feelings at all, but since you wrote it, people will probably assume you have carried on the same feelings and ideas throughout your life. Though as you grow and experience more things in life, you tend to look at life completely or at least partially different.

Characterizing myself as a writer

When I write I try to us my imagination as much as possible. I want to try and make sense out of whatever I am going to write, because if I don't understand it then I probably can't write it to where other people could. I like to go to the quietest place possible, so that I am not distracted. Probably my favorite place to study is at home at the kitchen table. A good cup of coffee never always helps to get things going.
Before I start writing I get together all of the tools I am going to need to write. I might need some reference books, or notes that I have wrote. I like to make an outline about what I am going to write. It helps me to stay on track if I have some guidelines to follow. Also an outline helps me to remember all of the main points, so I don't forget any information that I may want the reader to know.
Usually when I write I start off fairly good. I usually know what I am trying to say. Most of the time I lose my train of thought before I can finish everything. My mind sort of takes off in its own direction, so I take a break, and try to come up with something fresh to write.
Growing up I wrote a lot of short stories. Most of the stories that I wrote were fiction. They were based on some wild figure I had just thought up. I also like to write about the future, and what it might be like. I like to create crazy plots to try and keep the reader on edge, or always wondering what is going to happen next. When I was a child my mother made me keep a journal. I would write about what happened during the course of the day. In my journal I would also draw pictures about what I was writing about. As I got older, keeping a journal sort of got in the way of other things I was trying to do, so I stopped writing. I wish I would have kept up with it, because I know there is a lot of things I don’t remember that I wish I could.
Something that really frustrates me about writing is that sometimes I find it impossible to put my thoughts into words, and then transfer that onto a piece of paper. I also get frustrated when I think of something really good to write, and then forget it before I can get it down on paper. For the most part though writing is pretty fun, and I enjoy it.

Wednesday, January 30, 2008

What kind of writer am I? Blog 1

What kind of writer am I? I have no idea, but hopefully I will come to that conclusion by the end of this writing session. I feel like I am the writer that most teachers should fear. My ideas have always been all over the place and I never really understand where I am trying to go with my thoughts. I have learned a few things just in the few days we have had this class. I have learned that if I get blocked that I should do free writing, or I should just go off and start somewhere else. I am also learning that I need to set a ritual for my writing technique. The ritual that I have now is not working out the best for me. I usually write when I am tired and starting to go to bed. This means that my mind is not as where I would like it to be when I am finally able to write. I have two little girls and finding time for anything is hard enough. I know that I need to relax and just let myself go so that my writing can improve. Every time I try to write I hear this little voice always telling me that something is wrong and that I shouldn't be writing this way; or that what I am writing is stupid. The voice also tells me that I am not going to complete what I am writing because it is stupid, but I am losing that annoying voice. I am learning that if I just let go and just write that I will come to find what I seek; and that all I need to do is practice my writing. Even writing this I am nervous and I don't know quite what I am doing. I am learning though and that is all that matters. I went to the library here in town to talk to one of my favorite authors, Tamora Pierce. She told all of us there that the best way to improve our writing is to just keep writing. I am also learning that in this class, so I guess I should take the advice of that she gave us. I am going to stop being so critical with myself and my writing. I am going to turn a new page and see where it takes me. So now I know what kind of writer I am from all of this. I am the beginner who has to learn to let go and just have fun with what she is doing. Hopefully everything will work out the way I want it to.

Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Tara's Writing Style

My writing style for a blog is a lot better than on paper or on word. I don't know why it makes such a difference, but it really does. I think it might be because I feel like I'm writing in my own journal. Whatever it is, I feel like my writing is a lot better.
I've had a lot of practice on blogging because I used to have LiveJournal that I would write in everyday and I have a Myspace account where I occasionally write a blog when I have a lot of stuff on my mind.
I would have to characterize myself as a mood writer. I have a tendency to write about what is on my mind, whether I've had a good or bad day, or if I'm feeling happy or sad. I've always been told to write down my feelings, because afterwards, I'll never feel 100% better, but I will feel a little better. Ever since then, I've written down a lot of things that have come across my mind and it's helped me deal with a lot of things that I've had problems with. It's good just knowing that some weight that you might have had on your shoulders is now gone.
I've never followed along with anyone with trying to change my writing style. I don't think that you should look up to someone on how you should write. The way that you write should come from what you have learned and what you are used to. You should never have to change your writing for anyone.
I remember in my English class at Indiana State University, the papers I had to write, were supposed to be in APA format. In all the years that I was in school, I was always used to writing in MLA format, that I wasn't about to attempt to change my writing styles. I tried to do the whole APA format, but it just wasn't for me. I gave up, and just ended up writing my papers the same way, whether I got counted off for it or not. I wasn't worried about my grade on the style of writing that I did, I was more worried about the quality of my writing and how good it was.
But just being out of high school, my writing style hasn't changed, nor do I think it will change. I've written like this for a while, and I plan on sticking to my writing styles that I have right now.

An Emotional Writer

I would characterize myself as an emotional writer. My mood can change from minute to minute without any notice. On some days, a happy day, I might write about something that's full of energy and excitement. Other days or even other minutes I could begin writing with very dark and maybe even disturbing ideas.

In fact, I am such a head case, I might not even be able to write anything. I think it's almost impossible to even categorize myself as one particular kind of writer. I don't think I'm alone on this topic, everyone changes.

The other people are typing so fast I can feel my anxiety growing and growing. The instructor just informed us this needs to be about five hundred words every time we write a blog. Until today I had no idea what a blog is, and I definitely do not have enough to write to fill this assignment.

I have kept a journal throughout the years. This is basically a history for later in life for my three sons. They will, hopefully, be able to understand their mother, and all her strange behaviors. These writings of my life and events, will make me be able to also remember little things about life events from their childhood that I may have forgotten. This journal also gives my three precious angels advice about life and things they my have to overcome within themselves.

I am completely computer illiterate. This completely scares me to death, so like the trooper I'm trying to be, I will push on trying as hard as possible to give the instructor what he is looking for out of my writing. He might hate my style and I would imagine that the way I write and talk in circles might irritate him.
I am doing all that I can to overcome my emotional disabilities, but since most people can not see or touch mental illness, they either do not believe it truly exist or choose to ignore the fact that it is present and very real. I would probably get more help if I broke my arm than being mentally ill. I do not want to use this as a crutch, but the fact of the matter remains, I will struggle with some things.
The bright side to all of this is, manic states can make hours of work seem like minutes. They also bring out different ways of thinking that a normal college going student might be close-minded to and I consider that their handicap.
I might not write perfectly, but with the life experience I have and all the trails and tribulations I have gone through might just be the fuel I need to overcome my fears and anxieties about doing the I can in this English Comp. class.

characterize

When I write I try to us my imagination as much as possible. I want to try and make sense out of whatever I am going to write, because if I don't understand it then I probably can't write it to where other people could.
Before I start writing I get together all of the tools I am going to need to write. I might need some reference books, or notes that I have writtin. I like to make an outline about what I am going to write. It helps me to stay on track if I have some guidelines to follow. Also an outline helps me to remember all of the main points, so I don't forget any information that I may want the reader to know.
Usually when I write I start off fairly good. I usually know what I am trying to say. Most of the time I lose my train of thought before I can finish everything. My mind sort of takes off in its own direction, so I take a break, and try to come up with something fresh to write.
I used to believe that great writers were just born to write and I was not one of them. Now I think that some writers may have been born with this talent, but most great writers practice and practice to get where they are. As much as I try to excel in writing it seems like I do not get anywhere.
My writing skills have not change much from high school. I think writing is hard for me because I do not practice enough, or even try to attempt to write. So I have just stayed the same through the years.
I really hope this class that I am taking right now will helps me with my writing skills. Even though I know I won't need to use these writing skills in work or later on in life. I think that it helps a person with more than just writing. Through this class I hope to gain better writing skills.
I think writing is pretty complicated for some reason. It seems like it should be some what easy because you are able to express yourself in writing. When I have a writing assignment due; no matter what some time during the writing I will get frustrated. This leads to either taking a long break or just giving up for the day. At this rate it takes me a long time to get an essay done.
I believe that a secret spot or your own quit place is a great way to get writing or reading done. My own place where I get most of my writing done would have to be in my own room typing on my lab top. The best time of the day that I think I get most of my writing or homework would have to be late at night.

Setch Dreskar's Writing Style

What kind of writer am I, sounds like a simple question. Well it is and yet it isn't all at the same time. For me personally I am a Science reality fiction writer, try saying that three times fast. What I do is take a more science fiction style and yet ground everything within reality and explain how things like hovercrafts can well hover. I mostly tend to write about warfare, murder, or intrigue; each of those topics seem to be the easiest styles for me to write. Sometimes I will do hybrid styles to create new types of genres, or to heighten the sense of reality within a story.
I have been writing ever since I was very young, and so writing just seems to come naturally to me though don't get me wrong I was not a born writer but became one as I started to develop. Some of my first stories were no different then anyone elses, I just happened to enjoy it more then most and continued to develop stories into the novels and books I write today. You don't need to be born a great writer, just have enough passion for it to continue writing until you become great.
I guess I am not really rare though, I mean look at Eric Nylund, the writer behind books 1, {Halo: Fall of Reach} and 3 {Halo: First Strike} within the Halo book series. My style is much like his, and the way that he describes combat, with a sense of urgency and an air of uncertantity to make it more real is very much what I strive for in my own writings. Now don't try to associate all of the books within the Halo-verse as being his. For instance the second one entitled Halo: The Flood, was one of the worst books I had read, and that is very disappointing; luckily Eric Nylund was not the author and had no say in how the book was written.
I guess the only thing anyone can really do, besides being born and uncannily good writer, is write until they are as good as they want to be. I may or may not have been born witha writer's touch, I am not sure, i do know that I started writing when I was very young and have become a much better author now adays. Its like one of my favorite quotes says, "A man chooses a slave obeys!" -Andrew Ryan, fictional character from 2k's Bioshock, now do you choose to pursue writing or let someone else tell you how to do it?

Characterize myself as a writer

I find it difficult to define one's self as a writer, particularly when it is about me. I know that we have written on this subject before, but it isn't any easier for me to write. I think I would definitely put myself in the amateur group. I know that I don’t have to have anything published or anything to be considered a writer, but I know I need more experience. I honestly don’t write as much as I should. The only times I ever write are at work or the occasional reminder note I write to myself. Oh yeah, of course I can’t forget about my addiction to facebook. Also, I am frequently checking my e-mail. I have many friends and family that are out of town and we stay in contact by e-mail and our facebook accounts. The writing I do at work doesn’t express anything about me as a writer. I only write about the progression of my patients, and even that requires mainly my initials and a very brief summary.

In the brief time that I have been in this class I have learned a great deal. I have learned that in order to write a better and more descriptive essay that I should include my responses, questions, and my own personal problems and solutions with the particular piece of writing. Now the problem that I have with this writing is that I just don’t know what to write about. In my first writing piece I don’t want it to be wrong. I know that this is dumb, but I am a perfectionist and like things to be right the first time. All of my past teachers have told me to get over this because no one is perfect. I know this, but I need to embrace it and put it into use. Knowing that I have to have a certain number of words or pages slows me down also. Mr. Brewer said not to worry about that, but it is almost like a ticking clock in the back of my mind. We learned that we need to start writing rituals in order to write better. I need to find this environment and start my ritual. I learned somewhere that it takes twenty-one days to start a routine, but it takes a month to break one. I found that quite interesting.

However, I am very excited to see where this new, upcoming knowledge of writing is going to take me. I know that it will allow me to express myself more clearly and descriptively to get my ideas out of my head and into print.

Myself as a Writer Blog 12

Writing to me can sometimes be fun and a way to open up my creative side. I absolutely love writing about topics that I feel strongly about or enjoy. I have done quite a bit of writing in high school and I am extremely thankful for that. I feel it took me to the next level as a writer. As my college career began, I feel as if I have progressed as a writer. When I am writing I usually will grab my laptop, which just so happens to be pink, and get into my most comfortable position on the couch. I usually do alot of prethinking and jotting down notes . I feel the notes keep me on topic and it helps me to focus on the subject I am writing about. When I feel a spurt of creativity I usually will continue to type until my fingers begin to hurt. That way I do not lose focus. I lose focus easily because my life is very busy and if I do not continue to type while I have my creative spurt I tend to lose concentration.When I lose concentration I will usually take a few minute break, play with my dog, or even grab a snack. Sometimes I get writer's block or I lose my wonderful ability to write. To cope with those roadblocks when writing my paper, I continue reading through my material and jot more notes down. No matter how dry the subject may be; I feel that by writing down little notes, it helps you obtain a little more knowledge. Thus removing that horrid writer's block. This helps me write in a way people are more inclined to be interested in. If I lose concentration that definately means others are going to as well. Prewriting is amazing when writing a paper. I always do a rough draft before I write my main paper. This helps me understand whether or not my paper is flowing. With my prewriting draft I will have someone read it and honestly tell me if my paper flows, or correct any grammatical errors. Then I will rewrite and write my paper until I feel confident enough to turn it in. I also make note cards for everything going into my paper. I feel it keeps me more organized and I am less apted to lose information when transfering it from my rough draft to my final paper. It also keeps me from losing my citations for my paper.I enjoy creative writing and when writing about topics I enjoy, I tend to take a little more time and effort into making my paper more enjoyable. Generally I strive to make my papers as perfect as I can achieve. I believe that if we had not written as many essays as we had in high school then I would be completely lost, and I would not have found the creative writer in myself.

Characterising myself as a writer

I have done a lot for writing through out my high school and college years so far. I wouldn't consider myself the best writer but not the worst either. I have already taken this class once before last year, and I got a B in it. In order for me to get into the RN nursing program i need an A in this particular class. I have also already taken English 112. In previous English courses here at Ivy Tech I have had to write a couple research papers and some persuasive papers.
I find writing easiest for me when I am given a topic or at least an idea on what to write about. I seem to have trouble writing a good paper when I am given an amount that needs to be written. I think this causes me to think more about the length of the paper rather than the content in my paper. I have a problem with rambling on about things that have no relevance to what I am trying to say to make my paper longer.
My writing technique seems to work well for me. I like to do my research and then go through the things that I have found and highlight the things that I find important. After that I use a blank piece of paper and write down the topics that are going to be in each of the paragraphs. I put the information that fits into each paragraph. I then start to type my first draft. When my first draft is complete I like to get with someone and have them read my paper. They tell me what they think could be changed. I always take their ideas into consideration, but this doesn't mean that I will use them. I personally think that it's a good idea to have at least three people proof read your paper. The final draft is usually simple to do. I generally end up switching paragraphs around to make my paper flow nicer, fix grammar mistakes, and add other information that I think would make my paper a better one.

From this class I hope to be learn how to get my point across better when I am writing a paper. I need to learn how to describe what I am thinking better and be able to write it. Overall i don't think my papers that I write are bad, but I could definetly use some improvement.